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Title fits it well.

I'll just say one thing...the title sure does this song justice. I was thoroughly confused from beginning to end. What the heck did you say at the end, though?

ArdyParty responds:

It was my friend saying "My spoon is too big" Just repeated it and fucked with it.

Interesting.

That was you playing guitar, yes? Are the other instruments live as well?

P.S. Shouldn't this song be categorized under "Video Game"?

BonOfTheDead responds:

There's a video game category? I forgot about that.

And all the guitars were recorded one at a time, and the drums where a machine.

Interesting.

The melody and chord progression was catchy, and the effects were cool. Try making the bass louder, and maybe using a few different synths for the melody at different times too. The different sections of the song were nicely independent, yet flowed together pretty well. Once again, bring out the bass more (and use a different synth for it). But other than that, it was good! Keep it up!

Longenuity responds:

Thanks for all the tips, I'm gonna try to make a new bass-line and turn that up and I'm gonna experiment with other instruments too...I think a better drum beat other than a preset is a good improvement I'll add to mah list of improvements as well... I'm so glad I finally got some feedback, thanks again :D

Response to Longenuity

The second bass note should be a G, and the third should be an A (although the C# you have works fine too).

Anyway, the song sounded fine, just need to add more structure to it. Give an intro, some variations to the melody, something like that. It's a good start though.

NewTek responds:

Ah, thanks so much bro. I tried it out and it sounds much better. And thanks for the tips, I'll get started on a full version as soon as I have time. (:

Amazing.

Wow, that was amazing. My type of music, definitely. What program did you use to compose it? Just wondering. Keep it up!

Tamadrum responds:

Thanks for the complement Xoroux, I used The Fruity Loops demo for this... I'm just a bum working with free software. lol.

Awesome

Wow, great job on this piece! I especially like how the tubular bells help to personify some of the melody. This song evokes some emotions in me, and I listen to it a lot on Newgrounds. I greatly enjoy all of your work. Keep it up! you are so talented..

MaestroRage responds:

thank you Xoroux. I create each one of these pieces with the intention of evoking emotions, ideas, worlds, characters, scenes, the whole works. I have yet to achieve a skill where I can paint pictures for the listeners, but for now, I hope to give them a glimpse of what i'm trying to say.

I'm glad you liked the piece, thank you for the review. It having evoked an emotion in you means the piece was a success in it's intentions.

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